atmospheric perspective Posted on August 7, 2014 by The Course of Our Seasons weaving light and dark light and dark fog drifts on the morning cove sun and cloud sun and cloud pale morning light woven across a gray tapestry mists on the water hover in stillness light and dark sun and cloud Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading...
This is — simply! — lovely. I’m intrigued, as others have been, by how the spell has been woven.
So happy you enjoyed this – thank you – K
A magical misty morning…exquisite!
I, too, thought this was a classic form; clever refrains–two sets, repeated at the end, no apparent word or syllable count; yes, it could be fun to try it for FFA/MTB sometime. As others have said, clever, sweet, accurate capture of morning on the hills with a fog beard; tore up, blew out the prompt; nice.
Lovely. The poem and the picture complement each other perfectly.
Your use of repitition adds to the atmosphere of your poem. Lovely.
beautiful…reminds me of life itself with joys and sorrows..
those patches of fog dancing like fairies is a gorgeous picture.
oh – so much beauty and peacefulness of a breathtaking landscape – love the pic as well… so beautiful
Really nice! Is this written to a certain form?
no – but maybe we should create the form to coincide with the poem! thank you for your kind comment – smiles
A lovely tapestry of words ~ And that picture is just gorgeous ~
Fog does have moments of sun and then it’s quickly gone again. You caught the scene wonderfully with your words.
A beautiful morning scene, so well created Kathleen. Well done.
I love this morning scene and the way the way dog conveys an eerie feeling to a familiar setting. A great photo too!
I meant ‘the way fog conveys’. I am sorry I am so hopeless at typing from the tablet.
you captured the hazy scenery wonderfully – a great weave of words
Looks like my part of the country (WV). Lovely poem.
I love the play of fog, mist and cloud on the hills and water….sigh. Just lovely.
You’ve captured this poem with rich and tasteful energy of poetic light.
You’ve drawn a lovely scene with your words!
Lovely, changing views with the speed of our gait (or vehicle).
nice capture of that morning fog…the mountains were playing peak a boo with me on the way to work today…we had a rather heavy fog…always adds a bit of mystery to me.