Blue Sky

Blue Sky

From dawn’s horizon
Blue sky into blue water
The swallow flies to her mate

Waking to dawn’s light
Blue sky into your blue eyes
My heart flies to my lover

**** a form called sedoka from Japan for todays dVerse prompt

46 thoughts on “Blue Sky

  1. Oh so blue and refreshing, like a deep cool drink.
    From without to within, clean and wholesome, like the olden days.

  2. The connection between the two stanzas is beautiful, and the suggested image of the heart like a sparrow really rings true. Excellent work!

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