hasty departures and years
of running room have helped
make your escapes an elegant
expression of your life
with characteristic dust devils
riding the currents in your tracks
the visibility of your invisibility
static electricity snaps at your name
as the winds move through the thunderstorm
dark along the horizon
its not your staying or going that move me
but the turbulence left in your wake
thecourseofourseasons 
Very nicely captured!!! Great photograph to accompany it!
Thanks, Becca!
Well done! I can feel the wake of this turbulence!
Thanks, Jacquie!
“make your escapes an elegant expression of your life” We’re all escape artists in some way. Well said.
So happy you liked it, Alex – thanks for dropping by – K
ooh yes agree with trevor it is Doppler flavoured, the resonance of passing.
Thanks – I like that – resonance of passing : ) K
Nice piece!
Thanks so much!
oh dang….yeah its the picking up after the turbulence of the wak that is the messy part for sure…the blow in blow out….felt that….esp right after the holidays….smiles. ncie capture ma’am
Why, thank you, kind sir : ) K
excellent image with the dust devils
riding the currents in the tracks…and a felt write for sure, using the images of the storm to describe their personality…
Thanks so much, Claudia – always appreciate your time and comments. K
This piece is like a worded, personalized Doppler effect. It’s almost onomatopoetic. Pleasure to read.
Wow – what a wonderful comment – thanks! K